8.20.2012

Grammar Lesson Monday: Detached Body Parts



Welcome to Grammar Lesson Monday!
This continuous series will address many common grammar mistakes made in the media and that I've seen more than once.  I strive to make the world a better place with good grammar.

Today, we will learn about detached body parts.

This lesson is mainly for people who are writing.  It applies to novelists as well as students.

I get it.  We're trying to write descriptively, but sometimes it doesn't make literal sense, as in the case of detached body parts.

Example:
She blushed.  Her fingers reached out and took the birthday card.

See how "her fingers" are now detached from her body?  They are independently taking a birthday card on their own.

This is common with arms, hands, legs, and especially eyes.

I know this rule isn't super grammarific.  And few people are bothered by it more than most.  But, it's something to watch for, especially if it happens a lot.




That's it for today.  Celebrate good grammar!

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